Comments on: Among the Boughs http://wilderness.motleyvision.org/2009/among-the-boughs/ Thu, 29 Jul 2010 14:41:49 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: karen http://wilderness.motleyvision.org/2009/among-the-boughs/comment-page-1/#comment-849 karen Wed, 14 Oct 2009 05:51:09 +0000 http://wilderness.motleyvision.org/?p=1570#comment-849 Hi Tyler, I try to write at least half my poems in form, just to keep it alive out there in the world :) Thanks! Hi Tyler,

I try to write at least half my poems in form,
just to keep it alive out there in the world :)
Thanks!

]]> By: Tyler http://wilderness.motleyvision.org/2009/among-the-boughs/comment-page-1/#comment-848 Tyler Wed, 14 Oct 2009 04:43:37 +0000 http://wilderness.motleyvision.org/?p=1570#comment-848 I like what you have going here, Karen: the "slow release" of image and sound as the poem progresses, just like the rain caressing limb and pane, lattice, blossom, and ground, renewing the world. I especially like how the rhyme scheme isn't forced, how the language dances across the tongue, compelling readers into an interaction with the scene. Thanks for sharing your words with us. I like what you have going here, Karen: the “slow release” of image and sound as the poem progresses, just like the rain caressing limb and pane, lattice, blossom, and ground, renewing the world. I especially like how the rhyme scheme isn’t forced, how the language dances across the tongue, compelling readers into an interaction with the scene.

Thanks for sharing your words with us.

]]> By: karen http://wilderness.motleyvision.org/2009/among-the-boughs/comment-page-1/#comment-845 karen Tue, 13 Oct 2009 19:16:17 +0000 http://wilderness.motleyvision.org/?p=1570#comment-845 Lora, Thank you for commenting~ Lora,

Thank you for commenting~

]]> By: Lora http://wilderness.motleyvision.org/2009/among-the-boughs/comment-page-1/#comment-843 Lora Mon, 12 Oct 2009 22:35:08 +0000 http://wilderness.motleyvision.org/?p=1570#comment-843 I love soothing poetry, and I love sharing it with my children. Beautiful website, too. I love soothing poetry, and I love sharing it with my children. Beautiful website, too.

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