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2013 Spring haiku: Come join the dance!

by Patricia | 3.25.13

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In my part of the spring world, the arrival of the vernal equinox has not felt much different from the arrival of the autumnal equinox. The green flame is burning unusually low for this time of year. Winds have been abrasive and cold. Usually, the Big Green is well on its way by now, but only the dandelions are turning it up.

So I was wondering–how is spring coming along where you are? (For those of you who are moving into spring, that is.) I thought that it might be fun to give and receive reports of spring’s arrival in the form of haiku. That is, any excuse seems good for starting a haiku chain. Tracking spring’s approach–like news stations track Santa Claus’s progression toward their position–lends itself especially well to a sequence of meditative post-it notes.

What is a haiku? A haiku is a classical Japanese poetical form, usually 17 syllables all in a single line in Japanese, but I understand that there are longer and shorter forms.  In English, a haiku often takes the form of one short line of 5 syllables, a long line of 7 syllables, then another short line of 5 syllables, but there are many paths–pick what pleases you.  Often, haiku mention the season under scrutiny–in this case spring, obviously.  If you wish to learn more about haiku, you can go here or here.

For this chain, I’ll post an opener that I brought up out of Crossfire Canyon yesterday when I went down to look for spring there. Imagine my surprise to see that not even the wild buckwheat are bucking up yet. They’re usually the first flower to bloom, after stork’s bill. Then, the wild phlox.

But yesterday, nada.

Or only slightly more than nada.

After I post my haiku, the chain is open for business. Simply post your haiku in the comments below the post. You can riff off the previous haiku or totally cowboy it. Those of you who aren’t springing it up but are actually falling–don’t feel left out. Remind us that hemispheres have minds of their own. Just have fun.

Me:

Spring flickers low in
root embers and cold pith, in
rare red sparks of ant.

Go!

7 Responses to 2013 Spring haiku: Come join the dance!

  1. Mark Penny

    Rare red sparks of ant
    spatter stone, burn in the hand-
    holds, but I still climb.

  2. Sean

    The icicle at
    The tip of the juniper
    Tastes of juniper.

    or

    Musty juniper
    Flavors the thin icicle
    Melting from its branch.

    The second, I think?

  3. Patricia K

    I climb one warm slant
    where tiny green stars open
    the ground at my feet.

  4. Patricia K

    Monument Valley.
    Turquoise sky, silver spring light,
    red stone buttes inlaid.

  5. Th.

    .

    Waiting for rain
    and waiting and waiting and—
    False alarm. Waiting.

  6. Jonathon

    Spring hides
    in faithless sunshine
    and in gathering snows.

  7. Jonathon

    No:

    Spring coils
    in faithless sunshine
    and in gathering snows.

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